While writing my Memoir I had lots of other thoughts and ideas. It did not just come to be like that so if you are wanting the history around my memoir please cklick here.
From this process paper, it is obvious that you have given this memoir a lot of thought. I am glad that you tried some new things even when you thought your memoir was fine the way it was. This allowed you to see that there are some things that you had not considered that you could grow from.
One thing I would like to see in your process paper is an example of the lesson you are describing. This does not mean you have to type the whole thing out, but explain how you inserted or incorporated a lesson into your memoir.
Could you attach your memoir into the same post as the process paper? This way, I can refer back to the memoir more easily as I read the process paper.
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Julie-Anne,
From this process paper, it is obvious that you have given this memoir a lot of thought. I am glad that you tried some new things even when you thought your memoir was fine the way it was. This allowed you to see that there are some things that you had not considered that you could grow from.
One thing I would like to see in your process paper is an example of the lesson you are describing. This does not mean you have to type the whole thing out, but explain how you inserted or incorporated a lesson into your memoir.
Could you attach your memoir into the same post as the process paper? This way, I can refer back to the memoir more easily as I read the process paper.
Thanks,
Mme
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